Contents V2! Feedback please!

My latest contents page. I added more colour to the top half of the page because apparently it was too "blank" so the business of the whole page was realllly off. I also added more text and moved the images around to make it overall visually appealing. The colour scheme is the same as the front cover, so it has a continuity. Anyways, you know what to do, leave a comment down on the crotch!

Feedback time!

Okay you unrelenting monsters! It's feedback time on my contents page version one! I also put up my cover page so you can see the comparison. Now type! TYPE GOD DAMMIT!

Developing my contents page. (+ William Photoshop Fails Ep 2!)

Well, you guys, I finished my front cover! Rest assured that I DID get rid of that horrible background texture, so no worries. :D

But now I have to do a contents page. Yaayyy, work. -.-

So here's what I've been doing so far!

This also counts as William Photoshop Fails episode 2 so enjoy that too.

Some sticky tape images I got from the internet. Gonna use them to make my contents page more collagey, hoyhoyhoy. 

UGHHHH. WHAT IS THAT. THAT HORRIBLE BRUSH MAN-MADE LINES. GET IT AWAY! AWAY I SAY! THE AMATEURISH APPEAL!

So after that horrible nightmare, I was able to get some custom grunge brushes instead. Inner mind is at ease, looks more clean. 

More brush Shenanigans, trying to lower the opacity so the text is more visible...

Welp, I changed my mind on the colour. Red looks so much more fabbbulous. 

It fits the colour scheme as well and whatever. You know all that design stuff. 

I'm probably gonna add more later when this contents page really begins to set itself on fire. 

MORE FEEDBACK!!

Here's my final version, hopefully. If there's anymore feedback, or imperfections I need to delete please tell me now or I'm going to live with an ugly project forever. D:

COMMENTS GO GO GO!

Need some more Feedback peoplez!

So I think I'm done, but what do you guys think? I'm a bit vain and think it's absolutely FAAABBBULOUS. Give me your thoughts so I won't sound so much like a snob and also to improve my cover (obviously.)

Thank you guys!

Screen Grabs of Media Fails! Episode 1

So as you all know, we're working on our front covers now. But what you don't know is that I've been taking screen grabs of my failure. Wanna see them? Sure you do.

This circle is much too dark :(

Much better and better for the colour scheme :D

Getting my logo on the internet. Megaphone, yeah! It's loud and aggressive urgghh!!!

Basic formatting, hmmm. Seems a bit messy. I also got to sort out that background. Houses aren't very rockstar. :/

This microphone is going out of contrrroool!!!

The image I was using before the new one. Trying to erase myself with only the eraser tool, I think I need to use the selection tool next time though. 

See you next time on....

Screen grabs at Media Fails!

Improvements? PEER REVIEW TIME!

So guys, here's my cover page I'm making so far, trying to patch the image up to make myself look pretty! (and feel pretty *Desperation for attention mode on*) But I want to hear what you guys think, I want critiques people! Talk about my colour scheme or what I can do for arrangement and other stuff like that. Tell me how skinny I am, anything will be great, (I'm the asian one!).